This is an excellent portrait. You create a character who looks mundane, but snazzy, and his facial expression and posture say a lot about him, in conjunction. The elf ears are a nice touch, reminding us that this is not a human. If I have any "complaints", it's only that, if you took away the pointy ears, I would assume he's human, and there isn't anything else to suggest he is a "Shadowrun" character (such as the particular style of the suit, a background, hints of technology).
...man If they don't take you aboard they will be committing a "critical glitch".
Much of the art in the SR4 core book is in my opinion, ugh!. A lot of it looks unfinished or slapped out at the last moment (save for the colour pics and a few of the things they took form prevoius editions). The least they could have done was reuse some of Bradstreet's stuff to keep a bit of continuity.
Admittedly, the art in "Street Magic" is a lot better.